Soon to come with this piece is an environmental drawing and a rework of the Fire Wurm. As it stands now, the pillar coming out of the back of this golem is enchanted by magic from a race long since dead. This race put these same pillars throughout an active volcano to stabilize the rising magma and decrease the average Temperature. Neglect and ignorance has caused these pillars to begin to malfunction, consequently allowing the magic to go awry and do things highly unexpected. The pillars have given life to things not meant to move, such as the volcanic rock throughout the region.
(Work.In.Progress)
Cool concept, but think it out more thoroughly. Unfortunately what I'm about to suggest would require you to start over, but I think the results would be a lot stronger. I think a great concept would be one that doesn't need as much explanation, or at the very least, compliments the explanation just as much as the explanation compliments the image. Make me believe that that golem was once a solid piece of rock. Make it look like the arm broke away from the rest of the mass, and could fit back in if need be. Almost like a transformer...I'd make it more asymmetrical, as it stands it looks too natural. It looks like a being that already was, which had a column placed onto its back, not something that was created by the magic of the column. Also, it needs more neon blue shit everywhere.
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